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Gothic Lolita by TsukiGesshoku Gothic Lolita by TsukiGesshoku
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    Time taken in total : About 15 hours.
    Layers in total : 40.
    Program used : Adobe Photoshop CS5.
    Original Size : 3440x1932.

    .:。☆*゚‘゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆。:.

    This is a drawing for the contest :iconmiiyukichan:
    I made the best of myself, the price seemed interesting.

    I have not had one minute of rest.
    And I myself am amazed at the quality of design, it's rare that I embeds a person in one place.

    Here the FC :

    I hope to win with all my heart.
    And I hope you enjoy this drawing.

    It's 3:18 AM, I think I'll sleep, now.

    .:。☆*゚‘゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆.。.:* *.:。☆*゚’゚・☆。:.

    ☆ Character © :iconmiiyukichan:
    ☆ Drawing & Color © :icontsuki--dono:
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Detail was really paid attention to in this piece. The stitching of the dress, the folds of the fabric, the two souses of light. The only thing that really stands out to me that needs a little work is the eyes and the windows.

The eyes only need work, in my opinion, because of the rings. They seem hard, almost like they were filled in with a gradient creator. They really draw your attention, but I think the same thing would've been achieved with just those two colors because that electric blue really draws attention to the otherwise monotone-looking picture. (Not saying that it is void of color, just that the other colors don't really pop from each other, which is why the shading was so important to prevent it from being flat.) Otherwise, I do like the style of the eyes, going from as dark as the eyelashes, to really light at the bottom, even if you do loose the eyelashes a little bit where the color of the eye meets them.

A style choice that bugs me is the eyebrows, but that really is a style choice, so I won't spend time on it, other than just this.

The window is a little confusing. The way the curtains are makes the window seem a lot closer to her head than the size of the windows imply, which is all fine and well with the perspective that you don't really notice it until you look closer, but how the curtains go over the pillow suggests that it is a small window only the size of her head wide. - and the bars that go across the window, they usually don't blend right into the wall or the rest of the window, even if they are the same color. A small line, even if it's the tiniest that you can mange should help give depth to the window that you cant' quite achieve with the lighting.

The one thing I just don't really understand is the string... it's cute, but it took me a minute or two to connect the string by her feet to the string on her finger. I don't really have a complaint against it, I just figured I'd point it out. It's a really nice little bright spot to the picture, kinda like the eyes. It breaks things up a little bit and gives your eyes something else to look at and think about. It draws attention to itself against the otherwise gray bed.

Other than that, great job, great shading, the anatomy is really good as far as I can tell (near perfect enough that nothing stands out to me) By the way, the bows are nice touches, just wish I could see the detail, the shading makes them blend together in a smaller view.
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amu0404 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Dylan-saeko Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Artist
This is an amazing art work, well done!
Soul-Rokkuman Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Professional Filmographer
OMG I can't believe how much you have improve your art *-*
Metalraptor Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful work. ^_^
mangaudrey Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
J'ai vu tes dessins sur TVH, tes dessins sont magnifiques :) Félicitation !
Starboy3027 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
absolutly cute
Reincairnation Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
Amazing. and cute, of course
Yokyoko Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
She's just so cute. Speechless~
0Myako Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really cute~
JDogindy Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nicely done here.
EdwardElriclover123 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i may chang colors a little and i will credit you i will now fav
Blackvegetable Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
How very cute! :aww:
Little-Sock Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Je surkiff ce dessin à un point pas permis *_*
BL0odHunteR Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PerfecT ;D Yeah Love it <3
KimiK-A Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
sooo beautiful *w*
Nareion Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Quite the beauty!
MissNips Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wicked angle
red-and-blue-colours Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
After I see this I'm sure...u are a god. :)
DancingSubaru Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She looks adorable!!!
I love her outfit!
mimiyavi19 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Professional General Artist
trop mignonne *o* je l'ajoute!
iLeikNinetales Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
>< please made tutorial on eyes?? I LOVE THEMM SO MUCH LOL.
Krooked-Glasses Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
AimeeNyral Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uguu, so cute! *w*
Kattzu Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uwaaah I love this *A* :heart:
Cross-Limits Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
alexalex1004 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
pertty girl :love:
TomokoNoKazeHime Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful, and really sparkly XD Hope you win~
MeerD Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
cool <3
Waaaghzag Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Filmographer
Really love this :D
DarkyCakeDoodles Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...So much better than I could ever do. Good job.:heart: :iconorzplz:
Eveypie Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very beautiful I wish you luck in the contest :D
spiralmaestro Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
Shadowa-93 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Tu me rends ouf. :heart:
Arione-rii Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome sauce! ... :iconimhappyraveplz:
Maruuki Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is ;w;!!!!! wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u did avery amazing job and thepose wow wow wow u draw my yuki so cute *w*<33333333333333
thank you so muchfor joining!!!<3333
ilolamai Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Awesome work.
Jacker10 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She is so cute and sexy
DemiseMAN Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
whoaaa AWESOME COLORS and she so cute and sexy! XD
and YES you must sleep now!! lol
thanatos333 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
Muy linda, buena cámara XD
AzureRat Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was thinking of entering the contest but I don't think I can get amazing outfits done like this. :P
Dark---Melody Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
Elle est trop mignonne ! Comme toujours tu fais d'excellents dessins. Et j'aime beaucoup sa roche
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student General Artist
so good
Mister-Crow Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Pas mal du tout, les couleurs sont très bonnes, et le design du personnage est fort réussi.
bluewater333 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
nice colors.
xOwlheart Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
This is so gorgeous! I love the pose and colours, just beautiful :heart:
gamera68 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful and cute beyond words :love:
Nadugi Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012   Traditional Artist
it's so wonderful..............
mooneternity14 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's so beautiful :3
blahjerry Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DanzIndoGeek Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
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